Thursday 16 October 2014

Lake Illusion

I entered a short story competition run by "Aspiring Writers". USA.
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September 2014 Short Story Competition Winners

Ronnie DauberDirector at Paradigm Seed Publishers, Inc.Top Contributor
This month brought in some amazing imagination, and while all the stories were interesting there is one that caught the attention of all the judges right away. Two others followed not too far behind, and so this month we have three winners…….and they are:

First place winner: Lake Illusion by Ken Windsor
Second place winner: Grandpa Joe by L. H. Davis
Third place winner: The Souped Up Wildcat by William Pipes



LAKE ILLUSION                               Ken Windsor              

 “Hey Mitch, bring the tackle box in from the truck.” I bend to check that the old kerosene fridge is cooling down properly before I start to put our week’s supply of food in it. I had fired it up as soon as we arrived an hour earlier. It was a good run. The usual Saturday morning traffic out of town but it thinned out as we got into the hills.

“There you go, Bobby! What do you want it for? You checked it three times last week!” The box slides along the kitchen bench towards me.

“I want to retie a couple of those Red Butcher flies before we go out tomorrow. Did you check the boatshed when you went down to the jetty?”

“Sure did! I took the cover off the punt and the kayaks are still on the rack where we put them last season. I can’t wait to get out on the lake again!”

“We’ll have to check the outboard this afternoon and then we can get out and see if we can find that legendary ‘big one’ eh?”

“Your imagination runs away with you, Bobby. There’s plenty of fish out there but there ain’t no ‘big one’!”

“Yes there is! Remember the one Chuck lost two years ago. The one that nearly pulled his kayak under before it broke his line?”

“I reckon Chuck was just off balance and caught a snag that threw him. You know how he exaggerates!”

I return to stacking the food in the fridge. Mitch goes out to the truck, returns with the bedrolls and throws them onto the bunks.

“It looks like there’s a storm brewing to the west. There’s a thick line of black clouds coming up real fast and the wind is strengthening!”

“You go and make sure the boatshed is closed up properly, Mitch and I’ll check the window shutters on the cottage.”

As I walk around the west side of the cottage I am met by a window shutter slamming back at me with tremendous force. I turn my head and put my hands up to protect my face. The shutter slams into the side of my head and I drop to the ground.

I roll over onto my side and rub the side of my head. My hand is slick with blood. I sense someone approaching.

“Hi Bobby Winter, what are you doing? Getting yourself into trouble again?” I look up.

“Chuck! What are you doing here? You’re supposed to be away training with the army!”

“Looks like you need me here little brother – like always – I can’t turn my back on you, can I?”

With Chuck’s help, I stagger to my feet and we make our way, leaning into the wind, around to the cottage door. Once inside, Chuck slams the door shut as I drop into a chair at the table. Chuck takes a towel from a pile on the floor where Mitch has dropped them. At the sink, Chuck soaks it with water and dabs at the side of my head, washing away the blood.

“Don’t look too bad Bobby, you’ve got a cut on your cheek and you’ll have a black eye in the morning. Hold this towel on it ‘til the blood stops!”

“Can you see Mitch? He went to check the boatshed.”

“Mitch is okay. It’s you I came to see. I wanted to make sure you were all right and let you know I’m going away.”

The door opens and a blast of wind enters, pushing Mitch with it.

“The boatshed is all closed up – what the devil have you been doing, Bobby?”

“I got caught by a window shutter but Chuck helped me in here and washed it for me.”

“Chuck? He’s away with the army, you must have been hallucinating. Let me look at your face.” Mitch lifts the towel and examines the cut on my cheek.

“It looks pretty clean. You’ve done a good job.”

“But it was Chuck, he’s here!” I look around the room. There’s no-one here but Mitch and me.

The radio crackles: ‘Breaking news. Another soldier has been lost in the Middle East. Corporal Chuck Winter died today when his truck was hit by a road-side bomb.’